October Girl

I'm the girl in dark blue jeans. I'm the girl you can't see. I'm the girl you wish you could meet. If I knew you any better, we'd be lost ...

I agree with X, was there a war going on? Where is the character? What's the emotion? Is the character is pain? What's going on? I think you should expand ...

If I laugh myself to sleep, you'd ask if I was alright. If I wake up, I'm already in a fight. Something is wrong, somethings are gone. Something is lost. ...

Wow..... i'm impressed, I like it..... alot. I'm actually stunned. And trust me I don't become stunned easily. I think it flows well. Very nice. Are you new to the ...

I like how it flowed, how you described how the character felt. I know you could make this longer and I think it would be better if you did. :D ...

I don't know why I'm doing this again but I love your avatar too! 10/10

hm.... intresting choice..... I give it 8/10..... but that's just me -Max

Looks a bit 70's but still cool! 8/10

it looks real. Hm..... 7/10

I love it! it's really funny. 9/10

Via..... hm very short and cute. 8/10

I like it, but as EX said you need to expand it. I think it's fairly creative. We're all just trying to help. The girl who can't sleep -Insomniac

Really colorful. Ah I'll give it a 8/10

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Since Halloween is coming up I thought it would be cool if people imagined their own creepy room. Be descriptive, I'll go first. The room was dark, the rain pounded ...